I was riding my skateboard down on kilgore
I seen two kids on my neighbor lawn one really big and and buff and one small and skinny about to fight. So I stayed to wacth.
After the fight I went home and thought how did the skinny kid win that fight.
Thursday, February 19, 2009
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3 comments:
It was a good ba-da-bing but you misspelled some words.
For ex. Wacth(watch)and you put seen instead of saw
It was fabulous, except your grammar was a little bad at some spots. I like your word choice, love the adjecives. Great job!
You have very good description.Its like a little paragraph.
Raven
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