Thursday, February 19, 2009

Ba Da Bing

I was riding my skateboard down on kilgore
I seen two kids on my neighbor lawn one really big and and buff and one small and skinny about to fight. So I stayed to wacth.
After the fight I went home and thought how did the skinny kid win that fight.

3 comments:

Sandip said...

It was a good ba-da-bing but you misspelled some words.
For ex. Wacth(watch)and you put seen instead of saw

Megan said...

It was fabulous, except your grammar was a little bad at some spots. I like your word choice, love the adjecives. Great job!

~cutiepie09~ said...

You have very good description.Its like a little paragraph.


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